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tadscout
03-06-2005, 10:58 PM
Good article...

and- :welcome:

ChiWhiteSox1337
03-06-2005, 11:12 PM
Good article. Although, since I'm a bit nit-picky, I noticed you used "John" instead of "Jon" for Garland's first name and you put the r in Buehrle before the h! Minor mistakes, but I thought you might like to know.

chisox06
03-06-2005, 11:45 PM
Good article. Although, since I'm a bit nit-picky, I noticed you used "John" instead of "Jon" for Garland's first name and you put the r in Buehrle before the h! Minor mistakes, but I thought you might like to know.

Eh, I think its safe to assume thats the editors fault more than the author. Not sure if it works the same for online articles, but with a newspaper, the editor is responsible for all that stuff, the authors job is to get his main thoughts down on paper.

SOXintheBURGH
03-06-2005, 11:47 PM
Nice job!

oeo
03-06-2005, 11:53 PM
Great article! :redneck

And yeah that editor needs a little help, seems like a lot of mistakes to be making. Like the one's above and using "there" instead of "they're" at the end.